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Last years my family visited Japan. There were many clean streets and many kindly people but Japanese people couldn't speak English like me. I can't forget Universal Studio which is a famous amusement park in Japan. It was very exciting. We visited many places and saw many things. I want to eat sushi again. It is very delicious. My family like it. I want to visited Japan again with my family. Maybe I can visit Japan next years.

Hi [이름]! ^^ Thank you for your essay. Wow! Where in Japan did you go? I\'m guessing in Osaka since you went to Universal Studios. ^^ Anyway, you are improving a lot on your compositions. Good work. ^^   See you in class!   ==Teacher Bella==   Last years my family visited Japan. >>My family and I visited Japan last year. There were many clean streets and many kindly people but Japanese people couldn\'t speak English like me.>> There were many clean streets and kind Japanese people but they couldn\'t speak English like me.   I can\'t forget Universal Studio which is a famous amusement park in Japan. >>  I can\'t forget the famous Universal Studios amusement park in Japan. It was very exciting. >> CORRECT We visited many places and saw many things. >> CORRECT I want to eat sushi again. It is very delicious.My family like it. >> My family and I found sushi very delicious and I want to eat it again. I want to visited Japan again with my family.Maybe I can visit Japan next years. >> I want to visit Japan again with my family. We might visit again next year.