Homework

Hello, Teacher. It's getting hot here in Korea. We need to turn on a fan now. I like spring and fall. I'm so sorry that spring was over soon. Which would you choose - a high-paying job with long hours that would give you little time with family and friends or a lower-paying job with shorter hours that would give you more time with family and friends? Explain your choice using specific reasons and examples. It depends on my age when I have to choose. If I were in 20's, I would choose a high-paying job with long hours although it gives me little time with family and friends. To earn money and live on my own, the period that I concentrate on work is needed. However, if I were in 30's like the present 'me', I would a lower-paying job with shorter hours. Money is needed to be happy, but it is not sufficient to be happy. If I can live on my own, a lower-paying job with shorter hours is more attractive because it would give me more time with family and friends.

Hello Kaylee! You are absolutely right! Since I am still in my 20\'s, single and living independently, I would prefer a high-paying job. I don\'t really need a lot of \'personal time\' because I live away from my family. My friends all have their own lives too. I think it\'s enough to meet them once in a while. Of course, your situation is different from mine. ^^ Thanks for sharing. Review my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! It\'s getting hot here in Korea. >> CORRECT! We need to turn on a fan now. >> CORRECT! I like spring and fall. >> CORRECT! I\'m so sorry that spring was over soon. >> I feel bad that spring already ended.It depends on my age when I have to choose. >> My choice depends on my age.If I were in 20\'s, I would choose a high-paying job with long hours although it gives me little time with family and friends. >> If I were in my 20\'s, I would choose a high-paying job with long hours, although it only gives me a little time with my family and friends. To earn money and live on my own, the period that I concentrate on work is needed. >> To be able to earn money and live independently, I need to concentrate on my work.However, if I were in 30\'s like the present \'me\', I would a lower-paying job with shorter hours.>> However, if I were in my 30\'s, like the present \'me\', I would choose a lower-paying job with shorter hours.Money is needed to be happy, but it is not sufficient to be happy. >> Although money is needed to be happy, it is not enough.If I can live on my own, a lower-paying job with shorter hours is more attractive because it would give me more time with my family and friends. >> CORRECT!