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What do you think of child labor? Child labor is a chronic problem all around the world. That is usually caused by the awareness like we don't have to respect a human right of children. Generally, children not only can't insist their opinion directly and clearly but also don't know about appropriate payments, rules of labor etc. That's why their parents want them to work for a household and global businesses take advantage of them using cheap pay and poor labor environment. But recently there have been a lot of tries to change those things. For example 'Fair Trade', campaigns for children or making rules by international institute like Unicef. As a consumer, we should know which company do not 'Fair Trade' and which product is made by young people. And many assosiations have to monitor and accuse of bad group of people. Of course, we, especially developing country's adults, need to consider chilren to person who need to be taked care from adults.

 Happy Friday my dear [이름]!   I appreciate your effort in making your homework. Thanks for the opinion. I think child labor is happening in different parts of the world. Child labor is vey rampant in my country, too. I also feel sad because children at a very young age have to work. Some of them have their own reasons. Maybe some of them work because they want to help their parents. I\'ve seen a lot of children who work during their free time to raise money for their school expenses. And I admire those young people. But the sad thing is that there are adults who take advantage of children. They force them to work in exchange of a small pay. And most of the times they could not complain because of their circumstances. That\'s the reality children are facing right now.   Please check the corrections below.^^   ~Teacher Shanee   What do you think of child labor?Child labor is a chronic problem all around the world. >>> Correct!That is usually caused by the awareness like we don\'t have to respect a human right of children. >>> OR: That is usually caused by the fact that adults don\'t give much concern to children\'s human rights. Generally, children not only can\'t insist their opinion directly and clearly but also don\'t know about appropriate payments, rules of labor etc.>>> Correct! That\'s why their parents want them to work for a household and global businesses take advantage of them using cheap pay and poor labor environment.>>> That\'s why their parents want them to work for local and global businesses which take advantage of them. They just receive low salary and that they are forced to work in a poor labor environment.But recently there have been a lot of tries to change those things. >>> Correct! For example \'Fair Trade\', campaigns for children or making rules by international institute like Unicef. >>> For example, Fair Trade campaigns for children and enforcement of rules by international institutes like UNICEF.As a consumer, we should know which company do not \'Fair Trade\' and which product is made by young people. >>> As consumers, we should know which companies are not promoting Fair Trade and which products are made by young people.   And many assosiations have to monitor and accuse of bad group of people. >>> And many associations have to monitor bad groups of people. Of course, we, especially developing country\'s adults, need to consider chilren to person who need to be taked care from adults. >>> Of course, we, the people from developing countries, need to consider helping  children who are really in need. [I don\'t get what you\'re trying to say here.]