homework.

Nowadays popular music of Korea and singers are very famous in the world. I am proud of them. I like popular music of Korea too. Especially ballad is my favorite type of music. Ballad music makes me confortable and calm me down. These days, many teenagers like it which are very fast and noisy. I can't understand these music while I listen to them. I hope many teenagers enjoy listening to ballad and classical music. And then they can get confortable like me.

Hello [이름]!   Thank you for doing your homework. I also like Korean music. Some reminders:   1. Check your spelling. example: comfortable   2. Apply parallelism. Parallel structures include word or phrase patterns that are similar. When ideas in a sentence or paragraph are similar, you can reinforce these similarities in meaning by creating parallel structures. Effective parallelism creates symmetry in sentences and adds force to your writing; it emphasizes the likeness between two or more ideas. example: Nowadays Korean music and singers are very famous in the world.   Teacher Venus^^   Nowadays popular music of Korea and singers are very famous in the world. >>>Nowadays Korean music and singers are very famous in the world. I am proud of them. >>>CORRECT I like popular music of Korea too. >>>CORRECT Especially ballad is my favorite type of music.>>>Ballad is my favorite type of music.   Ballad music makes me confortable and calm me down. >>>Ballad music makes me comfortable and calm. These days, many teenagers like it which are very fast and noisy. >>>These days, many teenagers like music which is very fast and noisy.I can\'t understand these music while I listen to them. >>>I can\'t understand this music when I listen to them.I hope many teenagers enjoy listening to ballad and classical music. >>>CORRECT And then they can get confortable like me. >>>And then they can get comfortable like me.