homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름] !
I\'m glad that you are doing well in English. I commend you for your improvements.
I am more than happy to help you to become much more fluent! ^^
Please, check the corrections that I\'ve made so that you\'ll not commit the same mistake.
~T. Jeny
What make me happy?
Ifeel happy eating delicious food.
>>I feel happy whenever I eat delicious food.
And during taking with you, I also feel happy.
>>I also feel happy talking to you.
I think A happy is not special feeling.
>>I think there is nothing special about how we feel.
It depends on personal mind attitude.
>>It depends on a person mind.
I try to look positive way of life.
>>I try to look things in a positive way.
Thak makes me always feel happy.
>>That will make me feel happy all the time.
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