homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
I know you can really be successful in speaking the English language. You just have to remember all the things that you\'ve been learning so that you can apply it, if you are having a conversation with some one.
Have fun in learning and be confident!!!!
T. Jeny
I am sorry to upload my homework too late.
>>correct
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Do you think you have a healthy life style?
-->I try to have a healthy life style.
>>correct
I eat vagetable than meat. And i do exercise regualy.
>>I eat vegetables more than meat and I exercise regularly.
Is it possible to have a healthy life style in modern world?
--->Yes, But It is needed to have patience to sustaining healthy life style in modern world.
>>Yes, but we nedd patience to sustain a healthy lifestyle in the modern world.
Because there are many temptation to quit healthy life style.
>>Because there are ,many temptations to keep a healthy lifestyle.
Why do many people try to have a healthy life style? What is the main purpose of it?
----> I just reply these question all. Many people want to live long life with healthy.
>>As a conclusion, many people want to live long that is why they want to be healthy.
It is a hope for every person to live long without diseases.
>>It is our hope to live long without any decease.
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