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I am sorry to upload my homework too late.
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Yes, I agree. But I would like to earn much money.
Because enough money can save pity people.
I think If we know the way to use money smart, we can sell the happinss not buy as for free.
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I am sorry to upload my homework too late.>>correct--------------------------------------------Yes, I agree.
>>correct
But I would like to earn much money.
>>But I would like to earn a lot of money.Because enough money can save pity people.
>>I can also save money for the poor people.I think If we know the way to use money smart, we can sell the happinss not buy as for free.
>>I think if we can only use our money wisely, we can sell happiness.
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