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2015-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi. Jeny^^ Mers terror covers Korea. I want to come to peace again. 1. She is ravishingly beautiful. 2. I was Pleasantly surprised. 3. It was John who break the window. 4. She was quite happy to receive the prize. 5. It is only a temporary arrangement.

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Good morning, [이름] ! I\'m glad that you are doing well in English. I commend you for your improvements. I am more than happy to help you to become much more fluent! ^^ Please, check the corrections that I\'ve made so that you\'ll not commit the same mistake. ~T. Jeny   Hi. Jeny^^>>correct Mers terror covers Korea. >>Mers terror is on the rise in Korea.I want to come to peace again.>>I hope we can recover from it.1. She is ravishingly beautiful. >>correct2. I was Pleasantly surprised. >>correct3. It was John who break the window. >>correct4. She was quite happy to receive the prize. >>correct5. It is only a temporary arrangement. >>correct

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