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학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. Jeny^^
Mers terror covers Korea.
I want to come to peace again.
1. She is ravishingly beautiful.
2. I was Pleasantly surprised.
3. It was John who break the window.
4. She was quite happy to receive the prize.
5. It is only a temporary arrangement.
강사 첨삭
Good morning, [이름] !
I\'m glad that you are doing well in English. I commend you for your improvements.
I am more than happy to help you to become much more fluent! ^^
Please, check the corrections that I\'ve made so that you\'ll not commit the same mistake.
~T. Jeny
Hi. Jeny^^>>correct
Mers terror covers Korea.
>>Mers terror is on the rise in Korea.I want to come to peace again.>>I hope we can recover from it.1. She is ravishingly beautiful.
>>correct2. I was Pleasantly surprised.
>>correct3. It was John who break the window.
>>correct4. She was quite happy to receive the prize.
>>correct5. It is only a temporary arrangement.
>>correct
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