homework
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Essay: Is there a right time to give up and stop trying? Or should you never give up?
I think there is no right time to stop trying.
Actually, I tried to enter the university three times.
Although It was extremly hard time for me, enventually, I entered the university that I wanted to.
At that time, I learned if I never give up, I'll get my goal somday.
Still that time, I always do my best until I get achievement.
Therefore, It is not good to thinking that give up something.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ki!
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Your essay is evry inspiring. I will always remember
Essay: Is there a right time to give up and stop trying? Or should you never give up? what you wrote here when I feel like giving up already. Have a great day and keep on achieving all your dreams in life. Good luck!
~Kelly^^I think there is no right time to stop trying.
>> Correct.Actually, I tried to enter the university three times.
>> Correct.>> I tried studying in university three times.Although It was extremly hard time for me, enventually, I entered the university that I wanted to.
>> Although it was an extremely hard time for me, eventually, I was accepted in the university where I wanted to study.At that time, I learned if I never give up, I\'ll get my goal somday.
>> At that time, I learned that if I never give up, I can get my goal someday.Still that time, I always do my best until I get achievement.
>> Since then, I always do my best until I can achieve my goal.Therefore, It is not good to thinking that give up something. >> Therefore, it is not good to think about giving up.
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