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2015-06-04 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Essay: Is there a right time to give up and stop trying? Or should you never give up? I think there is no right time to stop trying. Actually, I tried to enter the university three times. Although It was extremly hard time for me, enventually, I entered the university that I wanted to. At that time, I learned if I never give up, I'll get my goal somday. Still that time, I always do my best until I get achievement. Therefore, It is not good to thinking that give up something.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ki! Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Your essay is evry inspiring. I will always remember Essay: Is there a right time to give up and stop trying? Or should you never give up? what you wrote here when I feel like giving up already. Have a great day and keep on achieving all your dreams in life. Good luck! ~Kelly^^I think there is no right time to stop trying. >> Correct.Actually, I tried to enter the university three times. >> Correct.>> I tried studying in university three times.Although It was extremly hard time for me, enventually, I entered the university that I wanted to. >> Although it was an extremely hard time for me, eventually, I was accepted in the university where I wanted to study.At that time, I learned if I never give up, I\'ll get my goal somday. >> At that time, I learned that if I never give up, I can get my goal someday.Still that time, I always do my best until I get achievement. >> Since then, I always do my best until I can achieve my goal.Therefore, It is not good to thinking that give up something. >> Therefore, it is not good to think about giving up.

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