Homework ^^
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Well, hello there ever pretty and gorgeous [이름]!! I hope you had a great weekend!! ^^,
Thanks for answering your homework again. Let뭩 work on your delivery later okay.
Have a great night!!! I missed you so much. ^^, OTL
~ T. Christine ~(>_<)~
3. Is there any person whom you admire the most? Or has there been anybody who has made a big influence in your life?
Yes, I have a best friend who made a big influence in my life.
>> Correct!
She is a Filipina who taught to my brothers in English.
>> She is a Filipina who taught English to my brothers.
Before I met her I couldn't speak English at all.
>> Before I met her, I couldn't speak English at all.
Even though I don't have ability in English at that time I wanted to make a friend with her so I tried to communicate and study in English very hard.
>> Even though I didn뭪 have good English speaking skills, I wanted to befriend her so I tried to communicate and study in English very hard.
Now I could speak in English and also gain confidence when I meet foreign.
>>Now, I can speak English and I also have confidence when I meet foreigners.
In addition, we have making friend each other for 5years.
>> In addition to this, we have been friends for 5 years now.
She is very special to me.
>> Correct.
When I am down and troubles she always gives good advise even today.
>>When I am down and troubled, she always gives good advices till now.
That's why I would be more a flight attendant because of her.
>>That is why I am more inspired to be a flight attendant because of her.
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