Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher.
I have to go. I have a class soon.
Last week, the professor promised to buy students some pizza during class.
So, I'm glad to go to school today. ^^
In not less than 5 sentences, share your thoughts about this:
You discover that your wonderful one-year-old child is, because of a mix-up at the hospital, not yours. What would you do? Would you want to exchange the child to try to correct the "mistake"?
This question is really terrible to think about.
If I have to make a decision how to do right now, I would never exchange my son without any hesitation.
However, if I discover that my one-year-old child is not mine, I would consider to exchange the child to try to correct the mistake.
In this case, I would propose to be on friendly terms each other to the parents who have raised my real son.
It seems to be better that I think I have two sons.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thanks for answering your homework. I know it was a difficult and terrible situation, but I wanted to test your critical thinking skills. :) Good job! Have a great day!
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher.
>> CORRECT! I have to go.
>> CORRECT!
I have a class soon.
>> CORRECT! Last week, the professor promised to buy students some pizza during class.
>> CORRECT! So, I\'m glad to go to school today. ^^
>> CORRECT! This question is really terrible to think about.
>> CORRECT! If I have to make a decision how to do right now, I would never exchange my son without any hesitation.
>> If I have to make a decision right now, I would never exchange my son.
However, if I discover that my one-year-old child is not mine, I would consider to exchange the child to try to correct the mistake.
>> CORRECT!
>> exchangingIn this case, I would propose to be on friendly terms each other to the parents who have raised my real son.
>> In this case, I would propose to be on friendly terms with the parents who have raised my real son.
It seems to be better that I think I have two sons.
>> It seems better that I have two sons.
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