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2015-06-08 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Teacher. I have to go. I have a class soon. Last week, the professor promised to buy students some pizza during class. So, I'm glad to go to school today. ^^ In not less than 5 sentences, share your thoughts about this: You discover that your wonderful one-year-old child is, because of a mix-up at the hospital, not yours. What would you do? Would you want to exchange the child to try to correct the "mistake"? This question is really terrible to think about. If I have to make a decision how to do right now, I would never exchange my son without any hesitation. However, if I discover that my one-year-old child is not mine, I would consider to exchange the child to try to correct the mistake. In this case, I would propose to be on friendly terms each other to the parents who have raised my real son. It seems to be better that I think I have two sons.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Thanks for answering your homework. I know it was a difficult and terrible situation, but I wanted to test your critical thinking skills. :) Good job! Have a great day! Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! I have to go. >> CORRECT! I have a class soon. >> CORRECT! Last week, the professor promised to buy students some pizza during class. >> CORRECT! So, I\'m glad to go to school today. ^^ >> CORRECT! This question is really terrible to think about. >> CORRECT! If I have to make a decision how to do right now, I would never exchange my son without any hesitation. >> If I have to make a decision right now, I would never exchange my son. However, if I discover that my one-year-old child is not mine, I would consider to exchange the child to try to correct the mistake. >> CORRECT! >> exchangingIn this case, I would propose to be on friendly terms each other to the parents who have raised my real son. >> In this case, I would propose to be on friendly terms with the parents who have raised my real son. It seems to be better that I think I have two sons. >> It seems better that I have two sons.  

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