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Do you think crying is a sign of weakness? or strength?

I think crying is not a sign of weakness and strength, but expression of emotion.

>> I think crying is not a sign of weakness and strength, but an expression of emotion.
The expression of emotion has been changed depending on various factors such as people\'s age, gender and atmosphere.

>> correct

For example, when I was 20th, I felt that crying is shy, but now I can reveal my tears without shame. 

>> Did you mean: For example, when I was in my twenties I was shy to cry, but now I can express my feelings more.

>> OR: For example, when I was in my twenties I felt that crying was embarrassing, but now I can reveal my tears.

I\'m still strong.

>> correct

However, sometimes I am crying.

>> However, I sometimes cry.

This is because the way to express my emotion is changed accroding to my age rather than I become weak.

>> It is because my way of expressing my emotions changed according to my age.

>> OR: My way of venting out my feelings changed according to my age rather than being weak.