homework

Good day, [이름]!!

Thank you for a wonderful essay! Keep it up!

I appreciate it a lot. ^.^

I can see that you are really eager to improve not only your speaking skills as well with your writing skill.

With that kind of attitude, I am more inspired to help you out. ^.^

You are right, there are things that mobile devices can\'t give that books can.

Let us hope that the next generation will still be interested in using books.

The main reason why people love using their mobile phone is because it is very convenient.

You can search anything without going to the library. ^^

Talk to you soon.
I hope that you are having a great day. ^^

Please feel free to express your ideas, don\'t mind if I don\'t talk in class. Hiihihihi.

Let us make the most of your time during our class. ^^

Teacher Nina

Do you think people don’t read enough books these days? Why?

These days, people can easyily meet a lot of information anywhere and anytime by using mobile phone.

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>> OR: These days, people can easily get a lot of information anywhere and anytime by using their mobile phone.

The mobile phone provides various interesting things such as watching movies and sports match, playing mobile games and conversation with friends.

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>> OR: Mobile phone provides various interesting things such as watching movies, sports match, playing mobile games and having a conversation with friends.
Even reading books is possible through the electronic book.

>> CORRECT

>> OR: Even reading books is possible through E-books.
The advent of mobile phone affects people\'s life style.

>> CORRECT

It also takes up people\'s time to read books.

>> CORRECT

People grow away from reading books.

>> CORRECT

However, I think books have their original attraction that the electronic media can\'t substitute.

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The trend use to be changed.

>> Did you mean: The trend that we are used to will change.

>> OR: The trend we are used to will be changed.

Thus, someday people may start to look for books.

>> CORRECT