homework

2015-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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In a paragraph, explain what activity or activities you would enjoy doing in place of housework. Almost always time, although I'm living with my parents, I live alone in my home because they are too busy to stay in home with me. So, sometimes, not only did I vacumed the living room but also cook some food for me. Also, I often operate laundry machine in order to clean the cloths. Hmmmm.... That's all. Actually, my mother did all the housework. When I got some housework, I learnded that It was extremly demanding work. So, I;m sereously thank you for my mother's work.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Ki! Thank for sharing this. I didn\'t know that you are good at housework. You are a good son because you help your mother. Keep it up!^^ Anyway, see you again in class. Take care! ~Kelly^^ In a paragraph, explain what activity or activities you would enjoy doing in place of housework.Almost always time, although I\'m living with my parents, I live alone in my home because they are too busy to stay in home with me.>> I am living with my parents but most of the time, I am alone in our home because they are too busy. So, sometimes, not only did I vacumed the living room but also cook some food for me. >> So, sometimes, not only did I vaccum the living room but also cook some food for me.Also, I often operate laundry machine in order to clean the cloths. >> Also, I do the laundry and wash all our clothes.Hmmmm.... That\'s all. >> Correct.Actually, my mother did all the housework. >> Correct.When I got some housework, I learnded that It was extremly demanding work. >> When I had some housework, I learned that it was an extremely demanding work.So, I;m sereously thank you for my mother\'s work. >> So, I am seriously thankful of my mother\'s work.

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