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I live in Pyeongtaek city.
I moved there 10 years ago.
Near the house where I live is my company and some schools for my children.
That is the resaon why I moved here too.
I am living in the first floor of the apartment.
It is quite a modern apartment.
The total floor size is about 30 pyung, which is about 100 square meters.
The apartment itself has wooden floors with under floor heating and
most of the walls are simply wall-papered in light colors.
It has 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, a kitchen and a big living room.
The bus station is located next to my apartment.
There are also many stores around.
I like this place very much because I feel comfort in it.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You did great today. It\'s good that you are using a standard measurement. English speakers wont understand you if you use Korean measurement.
Teacher Venus^^
I live in Pyeongtaek city.
>>>CORRECT
I moved there 10 years ago.
>>>CORRECTNear the house where I live is my company and some schools for my children.
>>>Near the house where I live are my company and some schools for my children.That is the resaon why I moved here too.
>>>CORRECTI am living in the first floor of the apartment.
>>>CORRECTIt is quite a modern apartment.
>>>CORRECTThe total floor size is about 30 pyung, which is about 100 square meters.
>>>CORRECT
The apartment itself has wooden floors with under floor heating and most of the walls are simply wall-papered in light colors.
>>>CORRECTIt has 3 bedrooms, 2 bathrooms, a kitchen and a big living room.
>>>CORRECTThe bus station is located next to my apartment.
>>>CORRECTThere are also many stores around.
>>>CORRECTI like this place very much because I feel comfort in it.
>>>CORRECT
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