Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Maybe everyday.
강사 첨삭
Happy mid-week!!
Yes, you are right, Alice!
It is fun to talk to our friends, family, relatives and so on.
I hope that you will also talk to them in English. ^^
I know you can do it.
Talk to you soon.
Thank you for doing your homework.
I encourage you to try to write longer sentences so we can also improve your writing skill.
Have a nice day.
Teacher Nina
Maybe everyday.
>> Better: I usually start up a conversation with other people everyday.
>> OR: I usually talk to other people everyday.
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