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2015-06-10 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. I like long hair. My hair waves a little naturally. So, long hair is easy to manage for me. I often tie my hair back. Special management is not needed. Someone very close to you is in pain, paralyzed, and you 'somehow' know for certain he/she will die within a month. He/she begs you to give him/her a fast-acting, painless poison so that he/she can die and stop suffering. No one else would ever know. Would you? I think that I don't have a right to stop his life. Of course, I strongly sympathize with his situation. To live and die are not human's. So, I couldn't help for him die unnaturally. In addition, voluntary euthanasia is not allowed here in Korea. In my opinion, it would best to help for him prepare his death well.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! In my 28 years of life here on earth, I have never had long hair. Haha! I\'ve always had short or medium length hair. You know how the weather is here in the Philippines so it\'s hard to maintain a long hair. Thanks for sharing your thoughts about this. ^^ Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! I like long hair. >> CORRECT! OR >> I like having long hair.My hair waves a little naturally. >> My hair is naturally wavy.So, long hair is easy to manage for me. >> CORRECT! I often tie my hair back. >> CORRECT! Special management is not needed. >> There is no special treatment needed. I think that I don\'t have a right to stop his life. >> CORRECT! Of course, I strongly sympathize with his situation. >> CORRECT! To live and die are not human\'s. >> To live and to die are not decided by humans.So, I couldn\'t help for him die unnaturally. >> So I couldn\'t help him die unnaturally. In addition, voluntary euthanasia is not allowed here in Korea. >> CORRECT! In my opinion, it would best to help for him prepare his death well. >> In my opinion, it would be best to help him prepare for his death.  

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