homework
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I am having many interest with children's education. So I had read professional advices through the internet. Depending on the expert's opinion, children should be requied to help with household task. It is a very important thing. Of course, I think so. Because children can gain respensbility and confidence. My two sons look like they feel be happy when they are helping me. And they are proud of themselves.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon!
Thanks for expressing your opinion.
I totally agree with it. ^_^
Anyway, you did a great jon in creating sentences. Keep it up!
~T. Jessie~
I am having many interest with children\'s education.
>> I am having much interest in children\'s education.
So I had read professional advices through the internet.
>> Correct!
Depending on the expert\'s opinion, children should be requied to help with household task.
>> Correct!
It is a very important thing.
>> Correct!
Of course, I think so.
>> Correct!
Because children can gain respensbility and confidence.
>> Because children can gain responsibility and confidence.
My two sons look like they feel be happy when they are helping me.
>> My two sons look like they feel happy when they are helping me.
And they are proud of themselves.
>> Correct!
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