homework

2015-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

If you could make a movie, what would it be about? If I would make a movie, I would portray ordinary people's life warmly. Even though some people feel boring, the features that ordinary people live life to the full can create an impression. In addition, I want to make a movie to expose social irregularities. Recently, media is unfair, biased and unbelievable. The media's original role is to report the truth. However, recently media provides prejudiced report to make an advantage to the specific groups like the ruiling class. For this reason, I want to reveal the problems of society that media is avoiding through my movie.

강사 첨삭

T.G.I.F. [이름]!!

It is our favorite day. ^.^ Yipee!
Thank you for doing your homework.

Wow! I want to see that movie that you are going to make. hihihihi.

It is really interesting.
I am sure that it will be an eye opener to people.

Hopefully someday I can really see those.

Have a great day.

See you in class.
Teacher Nina


If you could make a movie, what would it be about?

If I would make a movie, I would portray ordinary people\'s life warmly.

>> Did you mean: If I would make a movie, I would portray the life of ordinary people.

>> If I would make a movie, I would show the life of ordinary people.

Even though some people feel boring, the features that ordinary people live life to the full can create an impression.
>> Did you mean: Even though some people might feel bored about it, the essence of the story can create an impression.


In addition, I want to make a movie to expose social irregularities.

>> correct

Recently, media is unfair, biased and unbelievable.

>> correct

The media\'s original role is to report the truth.

>> correct

However, recently media provides prejudiced report to make an advantage to the specific groups like the ruiling class.

>> correct

For this reason, I want to reveal the problems of society that media is avoiding through my movie.

>> correct

파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.

다른 영어첨삭교정 보기

영어첨삭교정 ·