homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
T.G.I.F. [이름]!!
It is our favorite day. ^.^ Yipee!
Thank you for doing your homework.
Wow! I want to see that movie that you are going to make. hihihihi.
It is really interesting.
I am sure that it will be an eye opener to people.
Hopefully someday I can really see those.
Have a great day.
See you in class.
Teacher Nina
If you could make a movie, what would it be about?
If I would make a movie, I would portray ordinary people\'s life warmly.
>> Did you mean: If I would make a movie, I would portray the life of ordinary people.
>> If I would make a movie, I would show the life of ordinary people.
Even though some people feel boring, the features that ordinary people live life to the full can create an impression.
>> Did you mean: Even though some people might feel bored about it, the essence of the story can create an impression.
In addition, I want to make a movie to expose social irregularities.
>> correct
Recently, media is unfair, biased and unbelievable.
>> correct
The media\'s original role is to report the truth.
>> correct
However, recently media provides prejudiced report to make an advantage to the specific groups like the ruiling class.
>> correct
For this reason, I want to reveal the problems of society that media is avoiding through my movie.
>> correct
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