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2015-06-12 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. Today's writing topic made me feel happy even with just imagination. Anyway, below is my homework for today. In not less than 5 sentences, what would you do in the following situation: If you could have free, unlimited service for five years from an extremely good cook, chauffeur, or masseuse, which would you choose? Why? I wish I could have free, unlimited service from a good masseuse among those. My family member including my son loves to get a massage. We have a membership at a massage shop, 'The Foot Shop'. To get a massage for all family member, we have to pay much money. I would be happy if I can get a massage without worrying about the costs.

강사 첨삭

Hi there Kaylee! I\'m glad you liked the writing topic for today. I think I would choose the unlimited services of a chauffeur. Nowadays, I\'m too worn out commuting back and forth to work. It would be so much better if I have my own driver to drive me around whenever, wherever. ^^ Have a wonderful weekend! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT!Today\'s writing topic made me feel happy even with just imagination. >> Today\'s writing topic made me feel happy even though I just imagined it. Anyway, below is my homework for today. >> CORRECT!I wish I could have free, unlimited service from a good masseuse among those. >> CORRECT! OR >> Among those three options, I wish I could have free, unlimited service from a good masseuse.My family member including my son loves to get a massage. >> My family loves getting a massage, even my son.We have a membership at a massage shop, \'The Foot Shop\'. >> CORRECT!To get a massage for all family member, we have to pay much money. >> To get a massage for the whole family, we have to pay a lot. I would be happy if I can get a massage without worrying about the cost. >> CORRECT!

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