Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
I like gymnastics.
Because it is very funny.
It make healthy to me.
I like music.
Because my dream is singer.
I like a group class.<I do dodge ball>
Because it is funny.
강사 첨삭
HELLO [이름],
Thank you for doing your homework.
I didn\'t know that you like gymnastics.
I agree, that\'s difficult but it\'s good for the health.
I know you want to be a singer and I want to be your number one fan too.
I hope one of these days, I can hear you sing a song in our class.
Maybe, we can sing a song together too.
Don\'t you think that is fun?
I am not a good singer because I don\'t have a golden voice like you but I will try just to sing with you.
Keep dreaming and keep practicing.
I hope that someday, you will be one of the best singers in Korea.
Aja aja!
Teacher Sophia
Here are your corrections:
I like gymnastics. Because it is very funny.
>> I like gymnastics because it\'s fun.It make healthy to me.
>> It makes me healthy.
>> OR: It makes me fit as a fiddle. (fit as a fiddle - it is an idiomatic expression means in good health and good shape)
>> OR: It makes me in good shape.
I like music.
>> I like listening to music too. Because my dream is singer.
>> I want to be a singer. I like a group class.<I do dodge ball> Because it is funny.
>> I like my group class because I play dodge ball with them. It is fun.
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