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2015-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Sophia

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I like gymnastics. Because it is very funny. It make healthy to me. I like music. Because my dream is singer. I like a group class.<I do dodge ball> Because it is funny.

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HELLO [이름], Thank you for doing your homework. I didn\'t know that you like gymnastics. I agree, that\'s difficult but it\'s good for the health. I know you want to be a singer and I want to be your number one fan too. I hope one of these days, I can hear you sing a song in our class. Maybe, we can sing a song together too. Don\'t you think that is fun? I am not a good singer because I don\'t have a golden voice like you but I will try just to sing with you. Keep dreaming and keep practicing. I hope that someday, you will be one of the best singers in Korea. Aja aja! Teacher Sophia Here are your corrections: I like gymnastics. Because it is very funny. >> I like gymnastics because it\'s fun.It make healthy to me. >> It makes me healthy. >> OR: It makes me fit as a fiddle. (fit as a fiddle - it is an idiomatic expression means in good health and good shape) >> OR: It makes me in good shape. I like music. >> I like listening to music too. Because my dream is singer. >> I want to be a singer. I like a group class.<I do dodge ball> Because it is funny. >> I like my group class because I play dodge ball with them. It is fun.

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