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2015-06-15 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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Hi my teacher^^ My favorite novel is Anne of green gable written by Lucy maud Montgomery. When I was young, I read this book. And that time, during reading this book, I felt simultaneously happy and sad. Novel makes me dream just like Anne. And there is one thing that I remember scene is that Anne and her friend Diana do pledge of friendship between small stream. Actually I also do pledge with my friend like them. Though Anne is a orphan, She is always happy. She has great imagnation. I love dreaming girl Anne.

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Hello [이름], It commend you for answering our homework for today. I know that writing an essay is quite difficult but I also know that it can enhance your skills in writing. Giving our best foot forward is a step for us to believe that we can write and communicate our thoughts and ideas in a topic using English language. Always smile!!!!T. Jeny   Hi my teacher^^>>correctMy favorite novel is Anne of green gable written by Lucy maud Montgomery. >>My favorite novel is Anne of Green Gable written by Lucy Maud Montgomery. When I was young, I read this book. >>correctAnd that time, during reading this book, I felt simultaneously happy and sad. >>When I was reading this book, I felt simultaneously happy and sad.Novel makes me dream just like Anne. >>Reading a novel makes me dream just like Anne.And there is one thing that I remember scene is that Anne and her friend Diana do pledge of friendship between small stream. >>And there is a scene that I can still rememeber, that is when Anne and her friend, Diana made a pledge of their friendship in a small stream. Actually I also do pledge with my friend like them. >>Actially, I also made a pledge with my friend just like them.  Though Anne is a orphan, She is always happy. >>correct  She has great imagnation. >>She has a great imagnation.  I love dreaming girl Anne. >>I love to be like Anne.

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