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Hi [이름]!!

How was your weekend?

I am excited to hear great stories from you in class.

You are right! Difficulties/ challenges that come our way will help us to be a better person.

We should be positive always.

Don\'t deal on the negative things of life.

Always look at the brighter side, everything happens for a reason.

See you soon.

Teacher Nina

Some people think that facing challenges improves a person. Do you agree or disagree?

People meet various challenges in their life.

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>> OR: People encounter different challenges in their life.

In order to solve the challenges, people should use their energy and time.

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>> OR: In order to solve those, people should use their energy and time.

This process can gives people experience and knowledge.

>> Did you mean: Through this process, people can have a lot of experience and gain some knowledge from it.

>> OR: Through those things, people can have a lot of experience and gain some knowledge from it.

Also, people who overcome their challenges can get confidence.

>>  Did you mean: Also, people who overcome their challenges can be more confident.
>> OR: Also, people who get over those difficulties can gain self-confidence.

For these reasons, facing challenges can improves a person.

>> Did you mean: For these reasons like facing challenges/ difficulties. it can improve a person.

However, continuous challenges can make people exhausted.

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Thus, people used to feel life is hard

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>> OR: Thus, people think life is difficult.