homework:)

Your homework is indeed incredible^^
Do not worry about the mistakes you make, for they are normal!

I love travel and adventure.

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I’ve been to Canada, USA, Japan and Europe-Paris, Prague, Salzburg, Hallstatt and Vienna-.

>>I’ve been to Canada, USA, Japan and Europe-Paris, Prague, Salzburg, Hallstatt and Vienna.
 Every country I visited gave me special memories and every city I went was so beautiful.

>> Every country I visited gave me special memories and every city I went to was so beautiful.

 I really miss each of them.

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However, to me, the best memory of travel is the day of Salzburg.
>>However, to me, the best memory of travel is the day when I visited Salzburg.
 My husband and I went to Europe for honeymoon on this April.

>>My husband and I went to Europe for honeymoon this April.
In every city, the weather was very nice and the sky was so clear, except for Salzburg.

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 In Salzburg, we booked a trip of “Sound of Music”.

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We had been expected the beautiful shiny landscape of Salzburg.

>>We had expected the beautiful shiny landscape of Salzburg.
However, it was raining all day.

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 Although it was rainy, the landscape was gorgeous.

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But we little disappointed and felt depressed because we had expected sunny day.

>>But we were a little disappointed and felt depressed because we had expected a sunny day.
After the “moist” Sound of Music Tour, we went up the observatory of the castle of Salzburg-In German, “Festung Hohensalzburg”-.

>>After the “moist” Sound of Music Tour, we went up the observatory of the castle of Salzburg-Ii German, “Festung Hohensalzburg”-.
 We had to take a cable car because the castle was located on the 120m cliff.
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 On the top of the cliff, we could look down the whole Salzburg city.

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Actually, we didn’t expect too much as the Sound of Music Tour.

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However, we were truly moved from the prospect.

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 The atmosphere of cloudy vintage city looked more solemn, overwhelming and splendid with the weather.

>> The atmosphere of the cloudy vintage city looked more solemn, overwhelming and splendid with the weather.
We forgot the depression.

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We admired the view.

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We took pictures innumerably.

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 To this day, my favorite picture I’ve taken is the Salzburg city I looked down on the castle.
>>To this day, my favorite picture I’ve taken is the Salzburg city I looked down from the castle.
 I realized that rainy day is not always bad day to travel through this experience.

>>I realized that rainy day is not always a bad day to travel through this experience.
I think sometimes rainy or cloudy weather makes double charm of view.

>>I sometimes think rainy or cloudy weather makes a double charm of view.
 Even now, I remember vividly the scene of Salzburg on that day.

>>Even now, I vividly remember the scene of Salzburg on that day.
 I really want to visit not only Salzburg but also other cities of Europe again.

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That is the reason I work hard every day. :)
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 Thanks for your compliment, Rose! :)

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 I also very enjoyed our class this morning.

>> I also enjoyed our class very much this morning.

You’re so kind!

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And I think you are women of humor. :D
>>And I think you are a woman of humor. :D
 I used my dictionary for every sentences of the homework.

>>I used my dictionary for every sentence of the homework.
 I think I’m poor in vocabulary!

>> I think I’m poor at vocabulary!

 I have to study harder. :)

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 Please check the errors of homework-even these sentences-.

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 I’ll do my best.

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 And I hope you also enjoyed Monday! See you tomorrow. Bye. ^^ 

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