homework

Hello there [이름]!

Happy Tuesday!

I am so happy that you always do your homework.

You are right, health should be always our number one priority.

I hope that your family and relatives will always be healthy.

Talk to you soon.

Teacher Nina

What scares you the most about the future? Why?

When I was in my twenties, I was worried about uncertain future.

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>> OR: When I was in my twenties, I was worried about unsure future.
After my age was beyond 40 years old, I am always concern about my family\'s health.

>> After my age was beyond 40 years old, I am always concerned about my family\'s health.

>> OR: When I reached the age of forties, I am always concerned about my family\'s health.
I hope my mother and mother-in-law live helathy for the rest of their life.

>> I hope my mother and mother-in-law will be healthy for the rest of their life.  

I want to watch my children growing up with my wife.

>> I want to watch my children grow up with my wife. 
I would like to see my children having their own family.

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I desire living a quiet life for my rest days with my life.

>> I desire to live a quiet life these days,

>> OR: I desire to live a quiet life for the remaining days of my life.

To reach these all my wishes, the health of my family is essential.

>> To reach all of my wishes, the health of my family is essential.

>> OR: In order to attain what I want, my wishes. my family\'s health is essential.