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2015-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. Until this Thursday, I don't need to go to school because two classes was over. Instead, I am writing my term papers diligently. If I finish them, I could relax without worrying. Do parents have the right to bring their children to cafes and restaurants, where they are at risk of getting burned, where they may be bothersome to fellow patrons? Or do restaurants have the right to refuse patrons with children for safety and etiquette reasons? Safety is one of the main topics of Korean society these days. Today's writing question is closely related to our society's safety issue. In this regard, I think restaurants have the right to refuse patrons with children for safety. To ensure customer's safety, restaurants can demand their customers not to company with children. Consequently, we have an obligation to follow the guidelines of those restaurants for the safety of all customers.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for diligently doing your homework. I appreciate it. I\'m glad that we have the same opinion regarding this matter. I think parents should be more responsible for the way their children behave in public. Yes, it is hard to control kids, but they should at least be disciplined well. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT!Until this Thursday, I don\'t need to go to school because two classes was over. >> CORRECT!Instead, I am writing my term papers diligently. >> CORRECT!If I finish them, I could relax without worrying. >> CORRECT!Safety is one of the main topics of Korean society these days. >> CORRECT! >> of = inToday\'s writing question is closely related to our society\'s safety issue. >> CORRECT!In this regard, I think restaurants have the right to refuse patrons with children for safety reasons. >> CORRECT!To ensure customer\'s safety, restaurants can demand their customers not to company with children. >> To ensure everyone\'s safety, restaurants can demand their customers not to bring their children. Consequently, we have an obligation to follow the guidelines of those restaurants for the safety of all customers. >> CORRECT!  

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