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2015-06-16 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Which do you think is more important, our present or our future? Why? I think present is more important than future. That is why future made by present. To get better future, we should do more harder from now on. If we didn't do best at the present time, we never get good result in future. No one can make good future without effort at the present. Therefore, present is more important than future.

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Hi Ki! How are you doing? I hope that you are having a good morning! I agree that the present is more important than future. We should enjoy what we have now. Anyway, have a great day and see you later. ~Kelly^^ Which do you think is more important, our present or our future? Why?I think present is more important than future. >> Correct That is why future made by present. >> That is why there\'s future because the present leads us there.To get better future, we should do more harder from now on. >> To get a better future, we should work harder from now on.If we didn\'t do best at the present time, we never get good result in future. >> If we don\'t give our best at present time, we will never get a good result in the future. No one can make good future without effort at the present. >> No one can make a good future without effort at the present. Therefore, present is more important than future. >> Correct

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