homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Thank you for doing your best. Some reminders:
If a subject is singular, its verb must also be singular; if a subject is plural, its verb must also be plural. In the present tense, nouns and verbs form plurals in opposite ways: nouns ADD an s to the singular form; verbs REMOVE the s from the singular form.
examples:
Also if someone smiles, people around him become happy.
I think, smiling is a gift.
Teacher Venus^^
Hi teacher ^ ^
>>>CORRECT
This homework is little difficult to me.
>>>This homework is a little difficult to me.
However, I did my best.
>>>CORRECT
I thinks, Smile is gift.
>>>I think, smiling is a gift.
Because of smile become healthy.
>>>Because smiling makes us healthy.
If we are smile, our brain make hormone that called endorphin.
>>>If we smile, our brain releases a hormone that is called endorphin.
Endorphin reduces pain than morphine about 100~300 times.
>>>CORRECT
Also, If someone smile, his around become happy.
>>>Also if someone smiles, people around him become happy.
Smile help recharge our life.
>>>Smiling helps recharge our life.
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