homework
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강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
You are really an understanding student.
I am so blessed to have you in class.
It is nice that you spend more time with your children.
I admire you for being a good father to them.
Good job! You were able to express your ideas in writing.
Please work on the usage of words and sentence structure.
Enjoy the rest of the day.
Teacher Nina
Name your favorite pastime and explain why you enjoy it. Discuss.
My favorite pastime is now because the present becomes the pastime at this moment and I love my present.
>> Did you mean: I don\'t have any pastime nowadays, because I am busy at the moment studying.
(pastime means an activity that someone does regularly for enjoyment rather than work; a hobby.)
Studying abroad is the dream I have desired for a long time and now I am studying in the UK.
>> correct
>> OR: Studying abroad is one of my desires for a long time and now I am in U.K.
>> OR: Studying abroad is one of the things I wished for a long time and now, I am a student here in U.K.
I like children and now I am taking care of my son and daughter.
>> correct
>> OR: I like children and I am now taking care of my kids.
I like journey and now I am preparing for the trip of EU.
>> I like traveling and I am currently preparing for my trip to Europe.
Thus, I really enjoy my present.
>> Did you mean: Thus, I really enjoy what I have now.
>> OR: I really enjoy what I am doing now.
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