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2015-06-17 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. Thank you for remembering my birthday. When I was younger than now, I used to expect my birthday. But now, my birthday doesn't appeal to me. I've aged now. ^^ If you could be invisible for a day what would you do? Where would you go? And why? If I were a blind man only for a day, I would study English listening. There is high probability of getting hurt when I go out for myself. Because I'm not familiar with the stick for the blind. Instead, I could concentrate on listening English because I couldn't see anything. So, I think it would be a good opportunity to study English listening.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Once again, happy birthday to you! I wish you all the best in life. Don\'t worry, you are not aging, you are ripening to perfection. ^^ I think you misunderstood my question in your essay homework. \"Invisible\" means nobody can see you. So the question is, what would you do if nobody could see you for one day? Think about it and tell me tomorrow. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~  Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! Thank you for remembering my birthday. >> CORRECT! When I was younger than now, I used to expect my birthday. >> When I was younger, I used to anticipate my birthday.But now, my birthday doesn\'t appeal to me. >> CORRECT! OR >> My birthday is not as appealing to me as it was before.I\'ve aged now. ^^ >> CORRECT! If I were a blind man only for a day, I would study English listening. >> If I were a blind man for a day, I would study English listening.There is high probability of getting hurt when I go out for myself. >> There is a high probability of getting hurt when I go out by myself.Because I\'m not familiar with the stick for the blind. >> Because I\'m not familiar with a blind person\'s walking stick.Instead, I could concentrate on listening English because I couldn\'t see anything. >> CORRECT! So, I think it would be a good opportunity to study English listening. >> CORRECT!  

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