homework
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Hello [이름] ^.^
Happy Thursday ^^
I am so happy that you always allot some time to do your homework.
Thank you so much. ^^
You are right we should be conscious with the words or sentences that we say to others.
I feel sad that we won\'t have our class today.
I hope to hear more of your ideas tomorrow.
Have a great day.
Take care!
Teacher Nina
In my last essay, I misunderstood the meaning of pastime to the past.
>> I misunderstood the meaning of pastime in my last essay.
Have you ever said or done something under the influence of alcohol that you later regretted?
When I was in my twenties and thirties, I often regretted my behavior or speech during druken condition.
>> Did you mean: When I was in my twenties and thirties, I often regret my behavior and words that I say when I was drunk.
Thesedays, I make an effort to avoid mistakes in terms of alcohol.
>> Did you mean: These days, I make an effort to avoid committing mistakes when I drink alcohol.
Since the speech can hurt others heart and it is more serious than wound hurt by knife, I recently try to listen rather than speak.
>> Since my words or sentences can hurt others feelings and it is more serious than the wound done by a knife. I recently try to listen to others rather than sharing my opinions.
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