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2015-06-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

학생이 쓴 원문

In my last essay, I misunderstood the meaning of pastime to the past. Have you ever said or done something under the influence of alcohol that you later regretted? When I was in my twenties and thirties, I often regretted my behavior or speech during druken condition. Thesedays, I make an effort to avoid mistakes in terms of alcohol. Since the speech can hurt others heart and it is more serious than wound hurt by knife, I recently try to listen rather than speak.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름] ^.^

Happy Thursday ^^

I am so happy that you always allot some time to do your homework.

Thank you so much. ^^

You are right we should be conscious with the words or sentences that we say to others.

I feel sad that we won\'t have our class today.

I hope to hear more of your ideas tomorrow.

Have a great day.

Take care!

Teacher Nina


In my last essay, I misunderstood the meaning of pastime to the past.
>> I misunderstood the meaning of pastime in my last essay.
Have you ever said or done something under the influence of alcohol that you later regretted?

When I was in my twenties and thirties, I often regretted my behavior or speech during druken condition.

>> Did you mean: When I was in my twenties and thirties, I often regret my behavior and words that I say when I was drunk.

Thesedays, I make an effort to avoid mistakes in terms of alcohol.

>> Did you mean: These days, I make an effort to avoid committing mistakes when I drink alcohol.

Since the speech can hurt others heart and it is more serious than wound hurt by knife, I recently try to listen rather than speak.

>> Since my words or sentences can hurt others feelings and it is more serious than the wound done by a knife. I recently try to listen to others rather than sharing my opinions.

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