Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher.
My country, Korea is badly in need of rain now.
Many people expect that the prices of vegetables will be raised this summer.
We need to rain although I dislike a rainy day.
Anyway, below is my homework for today.
If you could hear what someone is thinking for a day, who would you choose? Why?
I definitely choose my son.
In fact, I'm worrying that my son often cries because of bad dream.
He confessed that he hates a night and scary things.
However, I don't understand exactly his mind.
So, if I could, I'd like to hear my son's thinking.
Then, I would help my son get rid of the source of trouble.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Good answer here. I guess most moms would say the same thing. I would never want my mom to hear my thoughts, though. ^^ That would be a nightmare for me! Haha! Have a great day~
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Good morning, Teacher.
>> CORRECT! My country, Korea is badly in need of rain now.
>> My country is in bad need of rain now.
OR >> My country badly needs rain now.Many people expect that the prices of vegetables will be raised this summer.
>> Many people expect that the prices of vegetables will increase this summer.
We need to rain although I dislike a rainy day.
>> We need rain, even though I dislike rainy days.Anyway, below is my homework for today.
>> CORRECT! I definitely choose my son.
>> I would definitely choose my son.In fact, I\'m worrying that my son often cries because of a bad dream.
>> CORRECT! He confessed that he hates a night and scary things.
>> He confessed that he hates the night time and other scary things.However, I don\'t understand exactly his mind.
>> However, I don\'t exactly understand his mind.So, if I could, I\'d like to hear my son\'s thinking.
>> So, if I could, I\'d like to hear what my son is thinking.Then, I would help my son get rid of the source of trouble.
>> Then I could help him get rid of his fears and worries.
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