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2015-06-19 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi teacher ^ ^ I like dairy product Dairy products are cheese, butter, yogurt, fresh cream. Among others, I favorite yogurt. Plain yogurt is specially food to me. I want to it every day. Because, It's a good for health.

강사 첨삭



Hello [이름]!

 

Thank you for doing your homework. Yoghurt is really delicious. Some reminders:

Most English sentences (clauses) conform to the SVO word order. This means that the Subject comes before the Verb, which comes before the Object.

 

Examples:

I (S) bought (V) a new computer (O).

She (S) doesn\'t like (V) dogs (O).

Why did you (S) do (V) that (O)?

 

Teacher Venus^^

 

Hi teacher ^ ^

>>>CORRECT


I like dairy product Dairy products are cheese, butter, yogurt, fresh cream.

>>>The dairy products that I like are cheese, butter, yogurt, fresh cream.

 

Among others, I favorite yogurt.

>>>Among them, my favorite is yogurt.

 

Plain yogurt is specially food to me.

>>>Plain yogurt is special food to me.

 

I want to it every day.

>>>I want to eat it every day.

 

Because, It\'s a good for health.

>>>Because it\'s good for health.

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