Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher.
I delivered your message about Father's Day to my husband.
After hearing your message, he smiled delightedly.
Anyway, my homework was a little late.
If you discovered a new island, what would you name it and why?
If I discover a new island, and I have an opportunity to name it, I would name it Jayden Island.
Jayden is my son's English name.
The name of island would be called by many people.
As a mother, I want to make a special present for him.
I believe confidently that having the same name with the new island would be a special memory.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Your son has a cool English name. It\'s quite unique. I wonder how he got it. ^^ Let\'s talk about it later.
Have a great day!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher.
>> CORRECT!I delivered your message about Father\'s Day to my husband.
>> CORRECT!After hearing your message, he smiled delightedly.
>> CORRECT!Anyway, my homework was a little late.
>> CORRECT!If I discover a new island, and I have an opportunity to name it, I would name it Jayden Island.
>> CORRECT!Jayden is my son\'s English name.
>> CORRECT!The name of island would be called by many people.
>> The name of the island would be uttered by many people.
As a mother, I want to make a special present for him.
>> CORRECT!I believe confidently that having the same name with the new island would be a special memory.
>> I am confident that having the same name as the island would be a special memory for him.
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