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2015-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Jamie

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Write an essay with 5 sentences about the topic below. What would you do if your best friend stole something from you? I havevn't been thought that topic. If my best friend stole something from me, First of all, I think why does he do that? If i can't find the answer, I will ask for him.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, [이름].

 

Thank you again for making an essay. Good job! Just continue to do your homework on your spare time because this is a key for you to improve and polish your English skills.

 

Take note of the corrections and notice how I corrected your grammar.

 

See you in class tomorrow. Good night.

 

~~ T. Jamie ^^

 

I havevn\'t been thought that topic.

>> I haven\'t thought about that topic.
If my best friend stole something from me,
First of all, I think why does he do that?
>> If my best friend stole something from me, I will try to think first his reason for doing that.

OR:

>> If my best friend stole something from me, I will try to find the answer.
If i can\'t find the answer, I will ask for him.

>> If I can\'t find the answer, I will ask him the reason for doing it.

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