Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher.
Due to my lack of vocabulary and grammar, I couldn't explain well the contents of my essay.
The important thing is that my interpretation is something strange to existing researchers.
I felt new trial is difficult through this experience.
If you had to choose, which would you give up: your sight or your hearing? Why?
I'd like to choose my sight.
In my opinion, losing one's sight would cause fatal uncomfortable in my life.
I wasn't born a blind man, so I would be unfamiliar with the braille.
Contrastively, If I still have my sight in spite of losing my hearing, I can understand speaking of others through subtitles or gesture.
Above all, if I lose my sight, I couldn't do anything independently.
So, I think choosing one's sight is better than choosing one's hearing.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. You are very perceptive. Your answers in these essay questions are always practical and direct to the point. Good job! Keep up the good work.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher.
>> CORRECT! Due to my lack of vocabulary and grammar, I couldn\'t explain well the contents of my essay.
>> CORRECT!
>> I couldn\'t explain the contents of my essay well.The important thing is that my interpretation is something strange to existing researchers.
>> The important thing is that my interpretation is strange to the existing researchers.
I felt new trial is difficult through this experience.
>> I felt that a new trial is difficult through this experience.I\'d like to choose my sight.
>> CORRECT! In my opinion, losing one\'s sight would cause fatal uncomfortable in my life.
>> CORRECT!
>> discomfortI wasn\'t born a blind man, so I would be unfamiliar with the braille.
>> CORRECT! Contrastively, If I still have my sight in spite of losing my hearing, I can understand speaking of others through subtitles or gesture.
>> Contradictingly, if I still have my sight despite losing my hearing, I can understand others by reading subtitles or gestures.
Above all, if I lose my sight, I couldn\'t do anything independently.
>> CORRECT! So, I think choosing one\'s sight is better than choosing one\'s hearing.
>> CORRECT!
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