Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Write an essay with 5 sentences about the topic below.
Describe something you could never give away.
I never give away sleeping time. Because, I sleep a lot.
If I could't enough sleep, I am depressed all day.
Also, I never give away private time. The private time is given healing to me.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름],
How are you doing? I am sorry, I didn\'t have time to check your homework a while ago. Anyway, good job for today\'s performance and homework. You are consistently showing an improvement in our everyday classes.
Just keep it up and continue in practicing how to speak using the English language.
See you in class tomorrow. Good night.
~~T. Jamie^^
I never give away sleeping time. Because, I sleep a lot.>> I could never give away my sleeping time because I sleep a lot.If I could\'t enough sleep, I am depressed all day.>> If I couldn\'t get enough sleep, I am depressed all day.Also, I never give away private time. The private time is given healing to me.
>> Also, I could never give away my private time. My private time is giving a healing to me.
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