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2015-06-25 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. It's already Thursday. I have only one day to meet the deadline for my assignments. Of course, I am almost done. If only one book existed in the world, which book would you like it to be? Tell me something about the book and why did you choose it? I'd like 'The Records of the Grand Historian' to be in the world. 'The Records of the Grand Historian' is one of the ancient China history, and it has the authority. It's about the warring states period in the ancient China. Through the rise and fall of each country, we can realize the fault of man, and learn the lessons of history. Besides, we can see many historical figures' life story such as king, queen dowager, general, assassin and so on. I consider history books as assorted gift sets to mankind. Therefore, I'd like to choose a history book.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. Good luck with your assignment. I hope you can finish it by tomorrow. Have a great day! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT!It\'s already Thursday. >> CORRECT!I have only one day to meet the deadline for my assignments. >> CORRECT!Of course, I am almost done. >> CORRECT!I\'d like \'The Records of the Grand Historian\' to be in the world. >> I\'d like \'The Records of the Grand Historian\' to be the only book in the world. \'The Records of the Grand Historian\' is one of the ancient China history, and it has the authority. >> \'The Records of the Grand Historian\' is one of the ancient books about Chinese history, and it has the authority. It\'s about the warring states period in the ancient China. >> CORRECT!Through the rise and fall of each country, we can realize the fault of man, and learn the lessons of history. >> Through the rise and fall of each country, we will realize the fault of men and learn some lessons about history. Besides, we can see many historical figures\' life story such as king, queen dowager, general, assassin and so on. >> CORRECT!I consider history books as assorted gift sets to mankind. >> CORRECT!Therefore, I\'d like to choose a history book. >> CORRECT!  

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