Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름].
Wow! You really are improving day by day. Thumbs up!!!
Practice more so that you can be an efficient English speaker soon, very soon. ^___^
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~~T. Jamie^^
Hum... this is a difficult topic.
>> Hmph..., this is a difficult topic.
OR:
>> Uhm..., this is a difficult topic.
A few years ago, I had bought a bicycle by used article selling cafe.
>> A few years ago, I bought a bicycle to be used in an article selling cafe.
The quality of bicycle was not good. So I wanted to refund it but i can\'t.
>> The quality of the bicycle was not good so I wanted to return it and have my money back.
OR:
>> The quality of the bicycle was not good so I wanted to return it and get a refund.
The seller did not any response my contact.
>> The seller did not respond to my call.
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