Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
3.16
-My Birthday
Because my birthday is very importamt.
I will have cake.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Great Monday!
I\'m glad you made your homework.! ^_^
Birthdays are such important celebrations.
They are a time for people to look back on their lives, reflect on what they have done, and look forward to what they still want to do.
They are a day to celebrate a life with family and friends, and rejoice over all the good and bad times you have gone through together.
Cakes are special.
Every birthday, evey celebration ends with something sweet, a CAKE, and PEOPLE to remember.
It\'s all about the memories.
~~Teacher Kris~~ ^_^
3.16-My Birthday
>> March 16 is my birthday.Because my birthday is very importamt.>> Because my birthday is very important.I will have cake.
>> Correct
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