Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Good morning, Teacher.
Now, I'm having a vacation.
After relaxing two or three days, I'll plan to study for my summer vacation.
I need to improve writing ability in English and reading ability in Chinese.
So, I'm thinking about concentrating on these two kinds of study.
If I have a chance, I'll talk to you later.
If today was the last day of your life, what would you want to do?
First of all, I would be with my family.
I think being with the people I love is meaningful when we would meet the las day of our life.
I would tell my family how I love them, and we are not unhappy because we have our family with us.
While writing this topic, it strikes me that I should love them as if today were my last day.
강사 첨삭
Hello Kaylee! Thank you for answering your homework. I like your answer here. It\'s very simple and concise. Good job!
Please check my corrections below.
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Good morning, Teacher.
>> CORRECT! Now, I\'m having a vacation.
>> CORRECT! After relaxing two or three days, I\'ll plan to study for my summer vacation.
>> After relaxing for two or three days, I\'m planning to study this summer vacation.I need to improve my writing ability in English and reading ability in Chinese.>> CORRECT!
So, I\'m thinking about concentrating on these two kinds of study.
>> CORRECT!
>> aspectsIf I have a chance, I\'ll talk to you about it later.
>> CORRECT! First of all, I would be with my family.
>> CORRECT! I think being with the people I love is meaningful when we would meet the las day of our life.
>> I think being with the people that I love is meaningful on the last day of my life.
I would tell my family how I love them, and we are not unhappy because we have our family with us.
>> I would tell my family how much I love them. I won\'t be unhappy because I am with them.While writing this topic, it strikes me that I should love them as if today were my last day.
>> While writing about this topic, it suddenly hit me that I should love them as if today were my last day.
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