Homework

2015-06-30 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Good morning, Teacher. Now, I'm having a vacation. After relaxing two or three days, I'll plan to study for my summer vacation. I need to improve writing ability in English and reading ability in Chinese. So, I'm thinking about concentrating on these two kinds of study. If I have a chance, I'll talk to you later. If today was the last day of your life, what would you want to do? First of all, I would be with my family. I think being with the people I love is meaningful when we would meet the las day of our life. I would tell my family how I love them, and we are not unhappy because we have our family with us. While writing this topic, it strikes me that I should love them as if today were my last day.

강사 첨삭

Hello Kaylee! Thank you for answering your homework. I like your answer here. It\'s very simple and concise. Good job! Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Good morning, Teacher. >> CORRECT! Now, I\'m having a vacation. >> CORRECT! After relaxing two or three days, I\'ll plan to study for my summer vacation. >> After relaxing for two or three days, I\'m planning to study this summer vacation.I need to improve my writing ability in English and reading ability in Chinese.>> CORRECT! So, I\'m thinking about concentrating on these two kinds of study. >> CORRECT! >> aspectsIf I have a chance, I\'ll talk to you about it later. >> CORRECT! First of all, I would be with my family. >> CORRECT! I think being with the people I love is meaningful when we would meet the las day of our life. >> I think being with the people that I love is meaningful on the last day of my life. I would tell my family how I love them, and we are not unhappy because we have our family with us. >> I would tell my family how much I love them. I won\'t be unhappy because I am with them.While writing this topic, it strikes me that I should love them as if today were my last day. >> While writing about this topic, it suddenly hit me that I should love them as if today were my last day.

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