Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello, Teacher.
As you told me, the half of this year already has passed.
Korean said that its speed is 10km/h when one is in 10's, but its speed is 30km/h when one is in 30's.
I really agree with this opinion.
Recently, I feel like that.
I should use my time effectively.
If your entire life was a movie, what title would best fit it?
I want to confess that my entire life wasn't that interesting to make a movie.
However, my effort to overcome sexual discrimination is worthy of notice.
I had grown up in patriarchal environment.
Korean society still has the patriarchal aspect.
Instead blaming the poor surroundings, I always try to get over them throughout my ability.
So, I'd like to make the title of "Live like Kaylee if you're a woman".
강사 첨삭
Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I like what you said here about the speed of life. ^^ Can you explain it to me more during our class?
Have a good day!
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~
Hello, Teacher.
>> CORRECT!As you told me, the half of this year already has passed.
>> As you said, the first half of this year has already passed.
Korean said that its speed is 10km/h when one is in 10\'s, but its speed is 30km/h when one is in 30\'s.
>> Koreans say that at the age of 10, its speed is 10 km/h, but when you\'re in your 30\'s, its speed is 30 km/h.
I really agree with this opinion.
>> CORRECT!Recently, I feel like that.
>> CORRECT!
>> OR: I\'ve been feeling like that recently.I should use my time effectively.
>> CORRECT!I want to confess that my entire life wasn\'t that interesting to make a movie.
>> CORRECT!However, my effort to overcome sexual discrimination is worthy of notice.
>> CORRECT!
>> worth noticingI had grown up in patriarchal environment.
>> CORRECT!Korean society still has the patriarchal aspect.
>> CORRECT!Instead blaming the poor surroundings, I always try to get over them throughout my ability.
>> Instead of blaming the poor surroundings, I have always tried to get over it through my ability.So, I\'d like to make the title of \"Live like Kaylee if you\'re a woman\".
>> So my movie would be entitled, \"Live Like Kaylee, If You\'re A Woman\".
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