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2015-07-01 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello, Teacher. As you told me, the half of this year already has passed. Korean said that its speed is 10km/h when one is in 10's, but its speed is 30km/h when one is in 30's. I really agree with this opinion. Recently, I feel like that. I should use my time effectively. If your entire life was a movie, what title would best fit it? I want to confess that my entire life wasn't that interesting to make a movie. However, my effort to overcome sexual discrimination is worthy of notice. I had grown up in patriarchal environment. Korean society still has the patriarchal aspect. Instead blaming the poor surroundings, I always try to get over them throughout my ability. So, I'd like to make the title of "Live like Kaylee if you're a woman".

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for doing your homework. I like what you said here about the speed of life. ^^ Can you explain it to me more during our class? Have a good day! Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT!As you told me, the half of this year already has passed. >> As you said, the first half of this year has already passed. Korean said that its speed is 10km/h when one is in 10\'s, but its speed is 30km/h when one is in 30\'s. >> Koreans say that at the age of 10, its speed is 10 km/h, but when you\'re in your 30\'s, its speed is 30 km/h.  I really agree with this opinion. >> CORRECT!Recently, I feel like that. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I\'ve been feeling like that recently.I should use my time effectively. >> CORRECT!I want to confess that my entire life wasn\'t that interesting to make a movie. >> CORRECT!However, my effort to overcome sexual discrimination is worthy of notice. >> CORRECT! >> worth noticingI had grown up in patriarchal environment. >> CORRECT!Korean society still has the patriarchal aspect. >> CORRECT!Instead blaming the poor surroundings, I always try to get over them throughout my ability. >> Instead of blaming the poor surroundings, I have always tried to get over it through my ability.So, I\'d like to make the title of \"Live like Kaylee if you\'re a woman\". >> So my movie would be entitled, \"Live Like Kaylee, If You\'re A Woman\".   

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