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2015-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. I am so excited to travel to Thailand. Only three days left to leave here.^^ If you had to teach someone one thing, what would you teach? Who would you teach and why? I would like to teach new students in my department how to write an essay. From what I had experienced before, new students have difficulty to write an essay. At first, they are commonly unfamiliar with the way of academic writing. So, having a mentor who can teach them how to write an academic essay is very helpful to improve their writing ability. Of course, I'm not still good at writing an essay well. However, I'm sure that my experience can play a role in improving new students' writing ability.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for answering your homework. Good job! Can you also teach me how to write? ^^ As a writer myself, I would also love to impart my knowledge and help someone else hone their skills. Please check my corrections below. Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! I am so excited to travel to Thailand. >> CORRECT! Only three days left to leave here.^^ >> There are only three days left before I leave. I would like to teach new students in my department how to write an essay. >> CORRECT! From what I had experienced before, new students have difficulty to write an essay. >> CORRECT! At first, they are commonly unfamiliar with the way of academic writing. >> CORRECT! >> usuallySo, having a mentor who can teach them how to write an academic essay is very helpful to improve their writing ability. >> CORRECT! Of course, I\'m not still good at writing an essay well. >> Of course, I\'m still not that good at writing an essay as well.However, I\'m sure that my experience can play a role in improving the new students\' writing ability. >> CORRECT!

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