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I think that It is important to have successful experiences.
That makes me to feel sense of accomplishment.
Thought it is very small thing, accomplishment give motivation to gear another plan for new challenge.
During in these process, we definitely meet to fail.
we can call like these are mistakes.
Mistakes give us sometime to feel guilty. Even if It is never wrong.
There are two ways to go, when you encounter this situation.
One is just adapting your fail, then you are really failure. But Don' t worry about it. You have to choose the rest.
The other is to remember your mistakes. And learn new thing from them. So change mistake to success.
I just suggest the example.
We want to learn English, We imagine the perfect picture of very fluently speaking English with foreigner. But that is not our reality. we always say that we have to study English. It is difficult to make decision with ourself. We need a small accomplishment. Before we make a big plan, make plan small thing. and we run for it. in these process,we meet mistake, Don' t hesitate to choose the rest. we try to talk with foreigner as English, Even if we use wrong English. that time, mostly we feel shy . The remember that we did mistakes makes us to dwarf the mind. But we can learn it from mistake that we did.
Why we can easily learn from mistakes than success?
Because we could easily remember the moment that we felt shy more than we felt successful.
The thing that we need is to cover this shy moment for the better perfect moment.
강사 첨삭
Thank you, [이름]!!!
I know that you are really eager to learn new things in English. Just continue to have that desire in studying because you can go along way in speaking the language well. Just keep on practicing!!!!
I hope you\'ll continue that level of positivity for our succeeding classes.
T. Jeny
I think that It is important to have successful experiences.
>>I think, it is important to have successful experiences.That makes me to feel sense of accomplishment.
>>It will help us feel a sense of accomplishment.Thought it is very small thing, accomplishment give motivation to gear another plan for new challenge.
>>Eventhough, it is just a small thing, accomplishments will give us motivation to face another challenge. During in these process, we definitely meet to fail.
>>During the process, we can definitely make a mistake.we can call like these are mistakes.
>>We call these as our failures.Mistakes give us sometime to feel guilty. Even if It is never wrong.
>>Mistakes can make us feel guilty even if it is not right to feel that way.There are two ways to go, when you encounter this situation.
>>There 2 ways to make us fell better if we encounter this kind of situation.One is just adapting your fail, then you are really failure. But Don\' t worry about it. You have to choose the rest.
>>One is just to adapt ourselves with our failures, but we shouldn\'t worry, we just have to choose to take a rest.The other is to remember your mistakes. And learn new thing from them. So change mistake to success.
>>We should remember our mistakes; learn ffrom it and change our mistakes.I just suggest the example.
>>I will suggest an example.We want to learn English, We imagine the perfect picture of very fluently speaking English with foreigner.
>>If we want to be fluent in English we just have to imagine that we are talking to a foreigner.
But that is not our reality. we always say that we have to study English. It is difficult to make decision with ourself.
>>But that is not real, it is quite difficult for us to make the right decisions.
We need a small accomplishment.
>>We also need small accomplishments.
Before we make a big plan, make plan small thing. and we run for it.
>>Before making a plan, we need to focus on small details first.
in these process,we meet mistake, Don\' t hesitate to choose the rest.
>>In the process, we can commit mistakes but don\'t hesitate to take a rest.
we try to talk with foreigner as English, Even if we use wrong English. that time, mostly we feel shy .
>>When we talking to a foreigner, we usually make mistakes because we usually feel shy.
The remember that we did mistakes makes us to dwarf the mind. But we can learn it from mistake that we did.>>Always remember that mistake can dwarf our minds. We can learn from our mistakes.Why we can easily learn from mistakes than success?
>>correctBecause we could easily remember the moment that we felt shy more than we felt successful.
>>Because we can easily remember our embarrassing experiences than our success.The thing that we need is to cover this shy moment for the better perfect moment.
>>We need to overcome our feelings so that we can handle the situation well.
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