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If I were had one million I would spend the half of money and I save the extra in the bank. At first, I would go to the trip for having a plan how to spend money. I come back to my normal life to sustain my life, as if I would not have a money. I don't want my life is decided by money. And I really don't want to see that my closed person are changed by money. Actually, I will abandon the money for my happy life. As a result my journey, I will reach the conclusion that I don' want to have much money.

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