Homework

2015-07-08 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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Hello, Teacher. I checked 'veterinarian' after class. I hadn't doubt the word 'animal doctor'. Thank you for telling me about it. A fairy stole your ability to smile. You need three things/events/people to bring back your smile. What would they be and why? How can they make you smile? There are several things that can make me smile. First of all, I am sure that my son can be the best remedy to solve this problem for me. Second, delicious food may have some effect to make me happy. Third. K-pop music can play a role in causing smile. They are the things that usually make me happy. So, I think above three things can be the solution in this situation.

강사 첨삭

Hi Kaylee! Thanks for answering your homework. Please check your third sentence here. It doesn\'t make any sense so I\'m not sure what you meant by that. ^^ Tell me about it tomorrow, okay? Ciao! ~Teacher Marie~ Hello, Teacher. >> CORRECT! I checked \'veterinarian\' after class. >> CORRECT! >> OR: I checked the word \'veterinarian\' after our class.I hadn\'t doubt the word \'animal doctor\'. >> CORRECT! >> Did you mean: I didn\'t know it was another word for \'animal doctor\'?Thank you for telling me about it. >> CORRECT! There are several things that can make me smile. >> CORRECT! First of all, I am sure that my son can be the best remedy to solve this problem for me. >> CORRECT! Second, delicious food may have some effect to make me happy. >> CORRECT! Third. K-pop music can play a role in causing smile. >> CORRECT! >> making me smileThey are the things that usually make me happy. >> CORRECT! So, I think above three things can be the solution in this situation. >> So I think the three things that I mentioned above can solve this problem.  

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