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2015-07-09 · 첨삭 강사 Jamie

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Essay Writing: Write an essay with 5 sentences about the topic below. Describe someone you respect deeply. I don't especially respect a someone. But I want to get respect from my son. So, I always try to be a good father. I read a book for infant care, education, playing with son etc.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, good evening to you [이름].   Long time no talk! ^^. I\'m really sorry for being absent these past few days. I was hoping to have a class with you a while ago but you were not answering my calls. I guess, you were still doing something at work. Anyway, I hope to talk to you tomorrow. ^^   Good job, by the way with your homework. You really are doing a very great job these past few days. Just continue with that. Practice more and be more expressive in class.   Thank you. See you tomorrow. Good night.   Bye.   ~~T. Jamie^^   I don\'t especially respect a someone. >> YOU MEAN TO SAY: I don\'t have a special treatment to someone when it comes to respect.But I want to get respect from my son.>> However, I want to get the respect of my son. OR: >> However, I want to receive some respect from my son.So, I always try to be a good father.>>  CORRECT OR: >> So, I always try to be a good father to him.I read a book for infant care, education, playing with son etc. >> I read a book about an infant care, education, playing with the children, etc.

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