Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay Writing:
Write an essay with 5 sentences about the topic below.
Describe someone you respect deeply.
I don't especially respect a someone.
But I want to get respect from my son.
So, I always try to be a good father.
I read a book for infant care, education, playing with son etc.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, good evening to you [이름].
Long time no talk! ^^. I\'m really sorry for being absent these past few days. I was hoping to have a class with you a while ago but you were not answering my calls. I guess, you were still doing something at work. Anyway, I hope to talk to you tomorrow. ^^
Good job, by the way with your homework. You really are doing a very great job these past few days. Just continue with that. Practice more and be more expressive in class.
Thank you. See you tomorrow. Good night.
Bye.
~~T. Jamie^^
I don\'t especially respect a someone.
>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: I don\'t have a special treatment to someone when it comes to respect.But I want to get respect from my son.>> However, I want to get the respect of my son.
OR:
>> However, I want to receive some respect from my son.So, I always try to be a good father.>> CORRECT
OR:
>> So, I always try to be a good father to him.I read a book for infant care, education, playing with son etc.
>> I read a book about an infant care, education, playing with the children, etc.
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