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2015-07-10 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

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It is difficult to discipline children. Parents should have patience and love when they care children. A good manner is not build a day. Childern are learned it from their parents. To be a good parents to children, They will be a good children. It might be naturally thing.

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 Good morning [이름]! I\'m glad that you are doing well in English. I commend you for your improvements. I am more than happy to help you to become much more fluent! ^^ ~T. Jeny It is difficult to discipline children. >>correctParents should have patience and love when they care children. >>Parents should be patient when they are taking care of their children.A good manner is not build a day. >>Having good manners can\'t be built in a day.Childern are learned it from their parents. >>Children will learn it from their parents.To be a good parents to children, They will be a good children. >>If parents are good to their children, they will be good children.It might be naturally thing. >>It is a natural thing.

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