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It is difficult to discipline children.
Parents should have patience and love when they care children.
A good manner is not build a day.
Childern are learned it from their parents.
To be a good parents to children, They will be a good children.
It might be naturally thing.
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It is difficult to discipline children.
>>correctParents should have patience and love when they care children.
>>Parents should be patient when they are taking care of their children.A good manner is not build a day.
>>Having good manners can\'t be built in a day.Childern are learned it from their parents.
>>Children will learn it from their parents.To be a good parents to children, They will be a good children.
>>If parents are good to their children, they will be good children.It might be naturally thing.
>>It is a natural thing.
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