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okey it is an intersting question.

>> Okay, it is an interesting question.
let me tell you about it.

>> Let me tell you about it.

Frist of all, these day foreign languge is very important to be succesful in the world.

>> First of all, these days, learning a foreign language is very important to be successful in the world.
so, i often study english.

>> So, I often study English.

may 1hour a day.

>> Maybe one hour a day.

and i can speak english and chinese.

>> And I can speak English and Chinese.
our company also has foreign county factory. such as china, america, so on, when i work in compay i sometimes meet foreign.

>> Our factory has branches in foreign countries such as China, America and so on. In the company, I sometimes meet foreigners.

so most of people try to study foreign languge.

>> So most people try to study a foreign language.

but we don\'t get to study it.

>> But we don\'t get to study it.

it is to hard to study english.

>> It is too hard to study English.

what do you think about it?

>> Correct.

overall, i think studing language is a good way to be suceesful in the world.

>> Overall, I think that studying a language is a good way to be suceesful in the world.