Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Essay Writing:
Write an essay with 5 sentences about the topic below.
What is your opinion about violence on television?
It's a heavy topic. I haven't thought to that.
These days, I think that the violence of internet is a bigger problem than it.
By reason of anonymity, People are easily talking about other people.
Someone is suffering from verbal abuse.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, [이름]!
How was your weekend? I bet you enjoyed it a lot. ^^. Today is Monday and everything is again back to normal.
Anyway, I like your idea about the violence caused by the internet. If it is possible, then maybe you could explain more and provide some details. That is for you to practice more of your writing skills as well as speaking skills if you try to put it into a speech and recite it.
See you later in class. Thank you, [이름].
~~T. Jamie^^
It\'s a heavy topic. I haven\'t thought to that.
>> It\'s a heavy topic. I haven\'t thought about that.
These days, I think that the violence of internet is a bigger problem than it.>> These days, I think that the violence of internet is a big problem.
OR:
>> YOU MEAN TO SAY: These days, I think that the violence caused by the internet is getting worse.
By reason of anonymity, People are easily talking about other people.>> By reason of anonymity, people are easily talking about other people.Someone is suffering from verbal abuse.
>> Someone is suffering from a verbal abuse.
OR:
>> A person may suffer from a verbal abuse.
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